Derry, Northern Ireland

Derry, Northern Ireland
A book I'm working on is set in this town.

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

I give up...

First 2 scenes from Carli's Kills:
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FADE IN:

INT. HIGH-RISE BEDROOM - NIGHT

MIKIE, 40 going on 30, and beautiful, blond STASI, 24, have sex. The bed thumps the wall. MOANS of ecstacy get louder -- louder -- then finish. Whoosh...

MIKIE
Oh, Stasi...baby...that was good. That was great.

STASI
It always is.

MIKIE
Shit, if my wife could...

STASI
Keep her out of this.

MIKIE
First girl I met who didn’t give a shit I’m married.

STASI
You screw around with other girls!?

MIKIE
No, no, no, that’s not what I meant.

She gets out of bed. Goes to the balcony. He follows. Caresses her.

MIKIE (CONT’D)
Stasi, baby, I haven’t been with anybody but you since I met you.

STASI
Not even your wife?

MIKIE
That’s not screwing. It’s more like using her pussy to masturbate. But you -- you got muscles where I didn’t know girls had muscles.

STASI
(smirks)
Cocksucker.

MIKIE
That’s your job, bitch. And you could teach fags a thing or two about it.

She grabs his hair and pulls him half over the balcony railing.

STASI
Mikie...have you been comparison shopping?

He laughs.

MIKIE
Never gonna do that to -- .

SCHWICK! A KNIFE STABS INTO HIS HEART! He gasps. Collapses.

Stasi SCREAMS -- is shoved over the railing. She falls 40 stories, SHRIEKING.

INT. ISOLATED HOUSE - NIGHT

The front door smashes open and two people -- GRADY (32, biker) and CARLI (28, pretty, as tough as any man and ready to prove it) -- crash in, tearing at each others’ clothes. Hungry kisses. She’s blond; his hair is on his face, not his head.

Outside is desert. Inside, cheap-ass furnishings are just visible.

They laugh, grab, kiss some more till Carli breaks away. She backs into a kitchen that was new in 1950, pulls a couple of beers from the ancient fridge.

Grady paces her, hungry. Grabbing. She shoves an open beer in his right hand. His left hand lost three fingers.

CARLI
What’s your rush, bitch?

GRADY
Got places to be by midnight.

She grabs his tee-shirt. Pulls him close. He drinks.

CARLI
You just gonna dump and run?

GRADY
Careful, this is my saint shirt.

CARLI
Saint shirt?

GRADY
All holey.

They kiss. He nuzzles her breasts.

CARLI
Grady’s hungry.

She tears off his shirt. Reveals an elaborate tattoo on his chest.

CARLI (CONT’D)
Any more tatts?

GRADY
Stasi’s gonna see -- real soon.

He downs more beer. Unbuckles his belt and the buttons of his jeans. She pinches his tits. He grinds against her. Kisses her. She dribbles beer down her front. He licks it up -- then grunts and tries to keep his balance.

CARLI
Problem?

GRADY
Just feel weird and -- and -- what the fuck? That beer...

CARLI
Grady -- have roofies been used on you, before?

GRADY
Roofies? Me? Fuckin’ bitch -- what you -- what you doin’ -- ?

He falls on his ass. Tries to talk but his words dribble into nothingness.

She pulls off the blond wig then her top. She’s now brunette. A bustier pushes her breasts up and accentuates her curves. Off it comes.

She stretches. Towers before him. Smiles.

He passes out.

EXT. DESERT - NIGHT

Grady wakes, bound spread-eagle to the ground, a ball-gag in his mouth. Wearing nothing. He fights to get free.

Carli straddles him. Makes him look at her. Smacks his face with a stack of twenties.

CARLI
Hi, Grady. Nice wad. Nearly twenty thousand. Thank you so much.

GRADY
(grunts)
What the fuck? Don’t you fuckin’ steal from me, you fuckin’ bitch! I’ll cut your tits off.

CARLI
I’m not stealing from you.

She holds up a Smart Phone.

VIDEO PLAYS — shows a drugged college girl held down on a pool table by four men as Grady rapes her. The man holding the girl’s head and shoulders is not completely visible.

CARLI (CONT’D)
That’s you doing your thing.

GRADY
(grunts)
I dunno what you’re talkin’ about. You got the wrong guy. I ain’t done nothin’ to you. I don’t even know you. What do you want?

CARLI
You don’t know me? Okay. My name’s Carli. Last name -- Vincenzo. Fire up any memory cells?

It does. He breathes faster. Pulls harder at his bindings.

Carli ends the video. Pulls a full honey bear from her purse.

CARLI (CONT’D)
Yes. This girl you’re raping -- she’s Lara Vincenzo -- my sister. This video was posted on her college’s web-site. A week later, she killed herself.

Next comes a buck knife. She licks her lips. Caresses his chest with it. Trails down his belly to his pubes.

CARLI (CONT’D)
I think that’s a crime, Grady, and where there’s a crime, there should be punishment. Here’s yours. Hope it was worth it.

She slices the knife into his skin, cutting around the tattoo.

Grady’s CHOKING SHRIEKS fill the dark, empty desert.

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