I don't know what to do. Does he not like how he's being portrayed in MQM? Is he not coming to terms with the ending? Which is sudden. That maybe I need to take further. So does he want retribution to be laid out?
I did once think I'd have his murder tear the police and district attorney's office apart. But that's not how things really work in the world.
Something adding to my uncertainty is, Rihanna Kelvar, a trans woman in Wyoming, was assaulted by a group of rednecks so pulled a gun to scare them off. She has a licence to carry that gun and Wyoming has a Stand Your Ground law, but she's been charged with two felonies and the guys who attacked her are off, scott free.
Wyoming is where Matthew Shepard was murdered, just outside Laramie, and long after his death there were people who still blamed him for it. Is that what will happen after Simon is killed?
Or...does he want me to show them getting away with it? Not have a nice ending but a cold-blooded one? Detailed? No one punished?
That means a lot of work to make certain it's honest, and even more work to make sure it's believable.
Of maybe it's a case of he just doesn't trust me to tell the story correctly, anymore...


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