Derry, Northern Ireland

Derry, Northern Ireland
A book I'm working on is set in this town.

Sunday, May 11, 2014

452

That's how many pages I now have...and maybe fewer...but I dumped the entire last chapter because it just prolonged the finale without any purpose. Instead, I moved one confrontation up, chopped out a minor sub-plot that meant nothing, and now I'm probably 90% done. One killer just got revealed and another is on the way...and then the denouement.

But this leaves me blank of brain, so instead, I shall show you how NOT to pounce on a cute boy who's doing a belly roll in his "Risky Business" style home...
See what I mean?

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