I input changes from the first act and managed to trim that half-page, but did it by intensifying Casey's character and letting Adam change his slow burn with Orisi. I'm still too focused on loading a lot of info in the beginning, but it's not really necessary to have it all right then. Doling out the info works better. Now it flows a lot better and feels much more organic.
I'm tossing my 100 page limit. The characters won't let me force something that artificial on the story. So be it. I want good, not cookie-cutter or standardized format.
I'm tossing my 100 page limit. The characters won't let me force something that artificial on the story. So be it. I want good, not cookie-cutter or standardized format.
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