Derry, Northern Ireland

Derry, Northern Ireland
A book I'm working on is set in this town.

Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Hmm...maybe...

This is close...maybe close enough. I tried it in total monochrome, except for the title, but for some reason the impact was lessened. It's like the knife needs to be in color so it doesn't vanish. And I like his face being a bit red to counterpoint it. The model's expression is good, though.

I sort of think I need something more, but I tried it with a lens flare behind him and that looked goofy. I laid a window with a silhouetted figure in it over the background and that was interesting...but it felt a bit like a slasher cover. This one strikes me as a bit mysterious.

Is it possible this is still the wrong way to go? Maybe if I did a more precise job of centering everything. I just eyeballed where things go in this mock-up. I might narrow the banner behind the title. The letters are 72 point, which I like, but it can be a bit closer together.

Okay...more work ahead...but I'm almost there...

5 comments:

MAC said...

This looks like the work of a photographer I know...

JamTheCat said...

Gee...I dunno...have you ever heard of a guy named Dan Skinner? Hmm? I've seen his work around...can't remember where, exactly...wait, right -- on Deviant Art.

Oh, and your blog. Fine. ;) Does good work. He shot this one a few days ago.

MAC said...

I thought so. :-) I didn't know that you were working with him.

JamTheCat said...

I'd contacted him a couple months ago on Deviant Art about maybe working up something for HTRASG but it didn't work out. Since I was having such trouble with PM, I contacted him, again...and I'm feeling a lot better about it all.

What do you think of the cover? Too austere?

MAC said...

Not at all. It's my favorite out of the ones you've shared.