What I have written is still pretty messy and all over the place, like his thoughts are. It needs to be clearer and more succinct for the reader to at least begin to follow. The rest of the book will be reflecting this sudden shift in his...in his psyche? Does it really fit with that?
Something else that popped up is how the B-girls, Bernadette and Brandi, pretty much ignore the major news about the mass murder in Houston...except to suggest those boys were killed because they were poor and not very smart. Brendan quickly shuts them down with a snarl of "Don't." I don't know where that came from, but it fits those self-involved princesses.
Also in the world of shit happens, I took my last trip out to Avis at the Buffalo Airport...and learned that SUV I'd turned in was rented one-way to La Guardia. The day after I turned it in. It was never being returned to BUF. I was supposed to file a claim with the Avis at LGA to get the car searched, not with BUF. And no one bothered to mention this to me till today. Plus, they were really surprised their manager hadn't responded to me...in the last 9 fucking days of me trying to contact him.
I managed to keep myself calm and leave. But I think I may shift my rentals away from them. I only use Avis because Caladex has a business account with them. I'm going into the office, tomorrow, and may suggest we also get one set up with Enterprise.
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